Week 8 Comments and Feedback



This is my favorite meme because I want to eventually get to the end of the road with my project


As I look through my comments on my “Comment Wall” for my project, it was encouraging to see how in-depth my classmates have read and evaluated my work. All of my comments had something positive in them, and that helped me take the criticism and suggestions in a better way. I had two comments on my wall, and both of them were full of helpful tips. First, both were happy with the name of my blog and loved the overall design (which is great because I was very new to making a website and am not very creative).

However, I wish more advice or suggestions on how I could better my website from a student’s perspective. One comment had a small sentence about giving more detail to the character’s personality and experience, so I will add that in the next few stories.

On the other hand, this shows how much I enjoy getting advice from my peers. When I comment on others’ projects, I try to give as many suggestions as possible so my comment can be valuable for them. I want to move my project forward, so I want to do that to others as well. Also, I love reading the introductions of my classmates. It has been neat to see how many people are so different; all of us are in different periods in our life and in college. All of us relate to the Indian Epics and other stories in different ways.

Now, when I give feedback in the following weeks, I will definitely add more depth to how the projects could improve. If other people did this more for me, I would be really grateful and it would hopefully make my project improve even more.



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