Mahabharata Storytelling (Week 6): Satyavati's Deception
The mighty
king, Vichitravirya, was just pronounced dead by his legal council. So many of
his subjects adored him and cherished his rulings, so a period of mourning occurred
for weeks. According
to my rulings of Dharma, he lived a righteous life, but the gods did not choose
to reward him with a son to take the throne. Because of this, I wanted to send
a test to his family to see if their Dharma was as important to them as it was
to Vichitravirya.
One week after his death, Satyavati, a beautiful sister to the king, makes a plan to tempt the royal family into breaking my cosmic law. Satyavati summons Bhishma, her and Vichitravirya’s brother, and makes a proposal to him.
“Brother, you had no opportunity to take the
throne because of your older brother, but this could be your chance to rule the
kingdom.” She said with a sneaky tongue.
Bhisma’s eyes lit up with excitement thinking
about his future on the throne. He leaned in closer and listened to her
opportunity.
Satyavati whispered: “Because your brother died
without bearing any sons for the throne, all you must do it lie with his widows
and you will surely have a son. Then, while the son is a child and learning to
be king, you will take the throne.”
Bhishma’s excited eyes slowly started to lower.
I, Yama, was intrigued by this conversation, so I listened in with great
attention. Will Bhishma make the decision to live righteously and live by the
law and his vows?
“Sister, even though taking the throne is
everything I could have ever wanted, I cannot break the vows I have to my wives
just to get a reward. I know Yama is watching over me, and I must follow the
honest path that he placed in front of me. Someday, I will be rewarded.” Bhisma
finally said, full of pride.
Satyavati, although proud of her young brother,
was still on the hunt for another member of the royal family to create sons for
the throne. She thought to herself: “This is for the good of the kingdom;
asking the family to sacrifice part of their Dharma for the wellness of the
kingdom’s subjects was justifiable, right?”
I was beaming with pride for Bhishma’s decision;
I will reward his greatly during his judgment day. Satyavati, on the other
hand, had secret intentions to break her family’s obedience to Dharma. Next,
she summons her son Vyasa and proposes the same plan to take the throne.
I was not surprised to find that Vyasa was not
as honorable as Bhishma; the son has not had a good example of righteous living
from his mother. Vyasa himself was born from Parashara, so he does not see the
bad consequences of illegitimate children.
I watched closely and saw Vyasa’s eyes light up
just like Bhisma’s did. He began dreaming of ruling the kingdom and having
servants and many riches, so his morals and cosmic law was not even a fleeting
thought.
Vyasa nodded his head, and his deceptive mother
smiled. She found someone to break the family’s Dharma. She will finally get
the reconciliation she deserves after bearing her illegitimate child.
Obviously, Katyavati is not aware of how my laws
work at all: she will be punished for her intentions as well as her illegitimate
child. Her grandchildren will also suffer.
After Vyasa slept with the widows of
Vichitravirya, all of the children suffered from hideous appearances or
blindness. Because their family did not live on the path of Dharma, I, the
ultimate judge, punished the following generations.
Author’s Note:
Vichitravirya
dies without having sons, so Satyavati (woman that Shantanu falls in love
with) begs Bhishma to sleep with his widows. He thinks that is
morally wrong and he doesn’t want to break his vows with his other wives. When
he refuses, she wants the widows to sleep with her son Vyasa (he was the son of
Satyavati and Parashara, a poet). Vyasa was summoned to sleep with the widows,
and he looked strange because he had been performing religious rituals. One of the widows, Ambika, is repelled by him and closes her eyes, so their son,
Dhritarasha, is born blind. Ambalika (another widow) turns pale when she sees
him, so their son, Pandu, is born looking pale. Ambalika makes her maid sleep
with Vyasa and likes him, so their child, Vidura, was born without any flaws.
BBibliography: The Mahabharata; R.K. Narayan.
I liked how compared to the original version of this story, you telling of it emphasizes why trying to give the kinds widows children would be a bad thing. It was mentioned in the original, but due to the way you told this story it was much clearer in this version. Besides for that it was a very faithful retelling of the story.
ReplyDeleteLeigh, I like that your story was told from the perspective of a god looking down on people's actions. I also like that this tale is centered around decision-making instead of direct action, because I always like seeing how characters make their decisions. The one thing that I want to say is to watch the tenses that you are writing in. Make sure that you are not switching between tenses inappropriately. Good job!
ReplyDeleteLeigh, I really enjoyed your story! I liked that you kept up with parts of the original story. I was slightly confused by who or what perspective you were writing in. I hoped to read up on why you chose the story and/or why you chose to write it the way you did, in the author's note. Overall, it was great that you utilized narrative to perceive that we can't fight destiny/the cosmic law! Great job!
ReplyDeleteLeigh,
ReplyDeleteI like how you gave the storytelling a different perspective and twist to the original. I think the narrative perspective gave this story a different overall feel than the other stories I have read in this class. I also enjoyed how you stayed pretty true to the original story. Keep up the good work and hopefully you will get to read one of my stories in the future!